Reviews for Won't cry for you |
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![]() ![]() Hi, first off before my absolute pissed-ness takes over is like to say this is a wonderful story, once I was about 1/2 way through I realized I had already read it but continued anyway bc it was good and I didn't remeber how it ended however, I'm ticked about the ending not exactly to this but bc of the fact you still haven't posted a sequel and it's been 8 years meaning you probably won't which ticks me off bc I really wanted to know what happened to them also I was curious about weather you would make it following right off of this story or jump to the future and like u even had the whole poll thing in place so I was like "yeah your 100% going to make a sequel" and I was so excited and then I go to ur page to discover that u haven't and now I'm just uber disappointed but other than that, wonderful story and great job with how you added in plots and completed other plots without losing track of them :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Damn. That last sentence. What a great use of alternating POVs! I love your writing. That sentence finally made me take a break from binge-reading and write a comment, after twenty chapters on the edge of my seat. This story is so well written, I appreciate all of the little details and the levers you use to make it hurt so good. I love it so much that I even forgive you for the over-use of "orbs"... it was written in 2010, so who cares :D Anyway, if you still read these comments - THANK YOU! Good stories are so hard to come by, and well-written ones even rarer :) Oh, and the sex scenes were really hot, by the way :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, Nooooooo. GODDAMMIT, LOGAN! Jeez, poor Declan. It's breaking my heart! I'm dying to know what happens! ! Xoxo Robin |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eeeeeeeeee yay! They admitted they're in lurv! I friggin love this story. Xoxo Robin |
![]() ![]() ![]() *gross sobbing* poor baby! Xoxo Robin |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh shit. He got roofied. Oh noes! O.O xoxo Robin |
![]() ![]() ![]() Right in the feels! Hng! Xoxo Robin |
![]() ![]() ![]() Unf. Damn. That was glorious. So friggin hot. Xoxo Robin |
![]() ![]() you never finished writing, ,I feel I've connected with the characters, I love it, I wanna know what happened. I think you should publish it contains so many real emotions and I think most people can relate, thanks for this story. you rock. |
![]() ![]() #shmuckisthebestinsultever |
![]() ![]() ![]() Look I love the storie abd i really like how you messed up your character mentaly, but ending, I just can't take it like this... Will there be more chapters? |
![]() ![]() ![]() :') I won't cry for you... I can only watch and hope. This story was wonderful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this really the end? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg I would really like you to finish this story. I want so bad to read what happens next with Logan and Declan so PLEASE come back |
![]() ![]() ![]() -sigh- I just have to face the facts: This story will probably never finished. It hasn't been updated for 2 1/2 years. I will keep it in my favorites and I'll always keep reading it, but I just wish the author would come on to at least say "I'm not finishing this story." /: |