Reviews for The Prerogatives of Fate
LolBookWorm chapter 26 . 1/28/2011
Why'd you stop at such a cliffhanger? Please write more soon
June's vampire chapter 5 . 7/1/2009
I loved this chapter it made me really want to read the rest.
artificial destiny chapter 3 . 6/29/2009
aw. even though the chapters are short, you really give a lot of depth into each character

awsum :)
artificial destiny chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
nice intro! cant wait to read the rest :)
benzene chapter 26 . 5/30/2009
Despicable. I can't believe you left with a cliff hanger. It's been a while since your last update. Is this story on hiatus?
clairey chapter 26 . 4/16/2009
Really liking the story...update soon :D
The Beauty of Lies chapter 26 . 3/16/2009
loved it update soon plz P
Maria chapter 26 . 1/10/2009
Hurry up and update! This is a cool story! !
Faith Adeline chapter 26 . 12/31/2008
Good, except some of the diologue doesn't really flow. For one thing, he's been around for a while, so his diologue is going to be, while modern, a bit refined. A vampire probably wouldn't say, "This whole dating thing is new to me," at least not in that way. Also, when you state a name, such as, "Look, Layla," you need the comma. For anything that's supposed to be a name, even a pet name, you need that comma before it. That's about it. Keep it up :)

AndItMovesUsAll chapter 26 . 12/26/2008
I really liked it, buty now im dying to know what happens next!
Silly-girl15 chapter 26 . 12/25/2008
I love this chapter. Conflict...
lostlotus chapter 26 . 12/24/2008
Intersting chapter
freak4hitsugaya chapter 26 . 12/23/2008
that was a really amazing chapter! please update soon! i have waited forever for this chapter!
pinkeclipse chapter 26 . 12/23/2008
she cant have kids with him?
Sabreal chapter 25 . 12/16/2008
Please update soon.


You have a faithful reader in me D
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