Reviews for Moving On
EverIntruiged chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
Absolutely speechless!

Connie
EyesEmphatic chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
Have been there, can definitely relate to this one. Fantastic writing.
BalletManiac chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
I liked your poem alot ! Especially the ending:

'Feelings gone, love lost, hope crushed

All is lost, but yet I must still go on'

I liked how you described the setting at the beginning of the poem, it painted an image of what was happening. Also how you related the slow tears to how you're not ready to let go.(atleast thats what i think you mean ;p)

All in all I loved your poem D It's going on my favs