Reviews for Maxely's Marvelous Circus
Nastrond chapter 5 . 5/1/2008
I can't find anything major, so...yeah.

Gabe deserves to be punished. He's a real -insert swear word-. I like where this is going, update soon.
Twilight Starr chapter 4 . 4/30/2008
Great job on description and taking us through his physical changes! I couldn't have done that. *applause*

Can't really find anything to critique, so I'll leave you alone.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 3 . 4/30/2008
They better have a good plan. I wouldn't want to be Jimmy. I can completely relate to the acne. ;) So, I wonder what will happen next.

Do they get a mission?

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 2 . 4/30/2008
Nice chapter. Some parts made me laugh. Good "Doctor Who" reference. I liked the dialogue between him and his sister. I like the name Carlita, too. So, great job!

~Twilight Starr~
Nastrond chapter 4 . 4/30/2008
Okay, not to kill anything ('cause for me th bad goes first), but watch what you type, a simple mistake can make a sentance really confusing, that happens a few times.

That kind of stuff happens to everyone, so, Other that that, this is a great story. Really different from a lot of things on this site. I want to see more of this. Keep it up.
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
Good start. It made me smile. :D Nice work. Have a brilliant day.

~Twilight Starr~
xBlackSoul chapter 2 . 4/26/2008

new fan here..

nice beginning, and this is really

different than other story, and I like it..

soo update ASAP!


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