Reviews for Special Someone
thequeerprodigy chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
big difference made by your special 's good!
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
I thought this was a very powerful poem. You got a beautiful point accross while adding in some other lovely aspects. The rhyme worked out well; it did not feel forced or strained. I especially liked the repitition of the first and last stanzas. At times, your line lengths made it hard to take in their individual meanings, but you still did a good job of getting the overall point accross. Very well done!
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
I'm quite confused by your style, but the meaning comes across nicely. The word "crap" however is so off compared to the beauty of what you've written - it stands out. No matter, good piece of work, centered on raw emotion.
multihuedme chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
I am just reluctant of letting you go.

My Special Someone...

nice line. :) keep writing!