Reviews for Turtledoves
FlamingFlie chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
Hm... It was an intersting concept for a story, a single oneshot about a bar and turtle doves... but I felt it was a tad confusing. Other than that, it was written well and there were no grammar mistakes that I saw. Nice job!

~Flamingflie
Denny Starbucks chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
I like it. Plot-wise.

The way it was written seemed rushed though. Grammar's okay.

Still, it lacks some detail. At least, to me. Hee.

Just one reader's point of view.

Continue writing!