|Reviews for whisperlie|
| Nemonus chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
Good! Slightly creepy ("walk not into the light...lovie m'love"), with a nice, quiet, contained or restrained rhythm that adds to the 'characterization'. You used combined words ("childloverfriend") well. The fifth chapter is a bit cliche, but otherwise I have no complaints about this. The fourth stanza is very nice, adds and interesting picture to it all...
| Bronzeage chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
Tell me its true.