|Reviews for Higher, higher!|
| its.Nothing.Special chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Crap, you write some sweet poetry.
[you push my heart higher, higher with your love] That just made me swallow and smile. This whole piece was so genuine.
And the last line was killer.
This makes me all the more grateful for your review. I get to enjoy your stuff now. Thanks for posting and don't ever (ever!) stop writing.
| fairytale failure chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
Aw, Cute! I love the metaphor of love like a swingset, because the playground theme makes it feel innocent and child-like. I really like the last line, especially the description 'brush-burned heart', I think it sounds original.
| angels know the rest chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
That was a very sweet poem, short but effective in its imagery. The last line was my favorite, and I felt that it added a unique touch. I kind of wish that the poem had rhymed, but that's just my personal preference; obviously you don't have to rhyme in free verse. Overall I thought that "Higher, higher!" was a nice diversion from the cookie-cutter love poems I've been reading (and probably writing) recently.