|Reviews for Quiet Fatigue|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
I love how you do the capitalization with the grammar. You dont do that in some of your pieces and I really thing it helps a lot with the flow.
The piece is interesting... I like the word choice a lot and the descriptions fit really well. The whole idea of a quiet fatigue is an interesting take on basically feeling sad/depressed. Nice done.
| a certain slant of light chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
This is... I relate to it. Not really the crying (I'm hopeless at crying, although the overwhelming feeling to weep seems to come at the most inappropriate moments; holding back tears in company while looking casual is something of an art), but... Well. "But I'm gone and I don't know quite where." That, I think, is the summary of my life nowadays. Very powerful (in a simple way, if that makes sense).
| Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
I like this. very good, solid piece :)
| instantramen chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
I really like this. Well written and easy to relate to.