|Reviews for Walk the Line|
| Namekemex chapter 11 . 10/5/2016
Its makin sense. thanks
| iamleslie chapter 20 . 9/30/2014
| gracesaada chapter 7 . 1/18/2014
I feel like Em should have been made older.. sixteen is too young. Will should have been made at least twenty two and made to act more mature- at the beginning he seemed a bit too childish for my liking
| Hopefulfutureauthor chapter 4 . 5/29/2013
This is great! I know who the killer is from this chapter.
| LikeAppleLove chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
Read before but didn't leave a reviw so here is...this story was sweet and original loved it and the chapter's being songs were awesome. I hope you continue writing brillant stories!
| HayleeBailey chapter 3 . 1/22/2012
This story is so funny! It cracks me up and i have a very... im hard to make laugh, lets just say that. Awsome story! and i dont even LIKE vampires!
| tye-dye eyes 191 chapter 4 . 1/19/2012
I am not sure if we are ment to like her but I seriously cannot stand Emilie. She is a bitch who thinks she get whatever she wants. I will keep reading because I read the first one, The Thin Line and I liked it a lot. I hope that she gets a better personality. If I was Will I wouldn't want her either.
| TheLonelyShe-Wolf chapter 20 . 12/2/2011
love this story just like the first one. im really looking forward to reading the next one. thumbs up ]
| violet.castle chapter 10 . 6/15/2011
What! Oh,God! he threw he out the window!
| violet.castle chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
What happened to the story before this? Where there was just Marina and Tristan?
| CrazyInAGoodWay chapter 13 . 5/15/2011
hey near the top you said : "My father would know something is wrong. He says he won't call but I know he will; he loves me." Cady yelled, her voice becoming hoarse. "You think Henry will view you as his equal? He doesn't even love you! You may be his mate but anything humane he felt before went out the window when he began killing his own kind! He's an animal and you'll be nothing more than that."
I think you might have meant Em was speaking, not Cady. Just thought I would make sure you knew :) love this series btw haha i've read it like 4 times and this was bothering me so i decided to finally tell you hahah :)
| TheLastFireBender chapter 20 . 4/30/2011
OMFG! AWESOME STORY SERIOUSLY THE LAST CHAPTER WAS A TAD BIT DISTURBING LOL I STOPPED READING IN THE STARTING CUZ I GOT SCARED ND JUST SCROLLED DOWN TO REVIEW I NOE IM A WIMP NY WAYS THIS SHOULD GET PUBLISHED CUZ IT IS RLLI GUD NY THX FOR UPDATING :P XOXO
| MuffinsRoxSox chapter 20 . 2/6/2011
Who! I love them!
| MuffinsRoxSox chapter 12 . 2/5/2011
Poor dearies. Forced to leave their home because they're being hunted.
| MuffinsRoxSox chapter 7 . 2/5/2011
Oh my gosh. Cady is the mate to a psychopath.