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| arrhythmias chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
oh, this is a thousand shades of brilliance and sadness and it broke my heart in the best way.
'You whisper to me,/ "I want to die. Kill me."'/ But I don't have to./ You're already killing yourself.'
| punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
This is powerful.
| happyharper13 chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Wow. That's so sad, but you do a good job of not hitting your readers over the head with the sadness. The ending is pithy but not cliched, and altogether very real. It hits hard. Good job.
| theangrylibrarian chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
wow this is really good. i really like the flow of this poem, how it goes from high to low just like the drug.
| Shasta Valentine chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
| East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
brilliant and clearly expresses your emotions.