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arrhythmias chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
oh, this is a thousand shades of brilliance and sadness and it broke my heart in the best way.

'You whisper to me,/ "I want to die. Kill me."'/ But I don't have to./ You're already killing yourself.'
punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
This is powerful.
happyharper13 chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Wow. That's so sad, but you do a good job of not hitting your readers over the head with the sadness. The ending is pithy but not cliched, and altogether very real. It hits hard. Good job.
theangrylibrarian chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
wow this is really good. i really like the flow of this poem, how it goes from high to low just like the drug.
Shasta Valentine chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
dramatically beautiful.

East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
brilliant and clearly expresses your emotions.