Reviews for Spider Web
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/19/2008
The idea of this piece is used a lot, but I like waht you did with it. The last three lines especially are really unique and really well done.
Getuie chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
this was interesting for me to read for several reasons. One being that I wrote a poem about a spiderbite... and haven't read any spider-related poems since. Another being that I, too, absolutely hate spiders... and because, while the analogy has been used before. It's still an excellent image to explain what you're saying. I particularly liked the fact that you mention your hatred for spiders... it may seem kind of strange seeing as you've just compared yourself to them, but... it's not like we always like ourselves that much either, now do we?
deletethisaccountplease9 chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
Whether metaphorical or not, I agree, spiders are icky. Good poem. It could easily have two meanings, which therefor implies I will be thinking about it for the next 10-20 minutes :D