|Reviews for Crash And Burn|
| S. M. Saves chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
I like the relationship surprise at the end. At the beginning, I thought the narrator and guy had a "past" together (so to speak, without trying to give away the plot to the rest of the readers), just not that type of connection. It explains his motive of trying to get her home safely and lets the reader decide for himself how the guy is without taking the narrator's word that he's pompous and egotistical. XD
I like how you conveyed her drunken POV as disoriented and fragmented, and managed to keep it that way throughout the entire piece.
A sad but happy ending. Well done and thanks again for the review.
| Alyson Roberts chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
What a fantastic story. I cried while reading it.
| lianoid chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
I am always incredibly impressed with your pieces. You have a really subtle way of making stories powerful. You slowly uncover more and more pieces to the character’s story in such a way that I find myself shivering at certain lines, or certain revelations. I don’t know how to coherently describe what you do, I just know that I love it. You capture and convey emotions really well, and mixed with your beautiful style of writing, I always find myself a little envious of your talent. Ha-ha. I’m sorry this review is so short. I’m battling a sore throat, headache and many other terrible symptoms of the common cold. I’m going to go crawl into bed now. Keep writing brilliant fiction and I’ll keep reviewing. ;)
| hahaheeheehaha chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
aww that was so sad it nearly made me cry. it was really good though, thanks for writing it.