Reviews for Mother's Gift |
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Luny Loona chapter 1 . 5/2/2008 I like the message behind it! Although you kept the syllables of each line of each verse relatively equal, it doesn't have much of a rhythmic feel. You might want to revise your rhyme scheme. But anyway. As I said, the message behind it is nice, but maybe you could put a little more into how humans are destroying the world. Have a nice day. |
Andaren chapter 1 . 4/29/2008 Sentiments I share. WOnderfully written :) Blessed Be, Andaren x |
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 4/28/2008 nice message good rhyme scheme |