Reviews for Mother's Gift
Luny Loona chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
I like the message behind it!

Although you kept the syllables of each line of each verse relatively equal, it doesn't have much of a rhythmic feel. You might want to revise your rhyme scheme.

But anyway. As I said, the message behind it is nice, but maybe you could put a little more into how humans are destroying the world.

Have a nice day.
Andaren chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
Sentiments I share.

WOnderfully written :)

Blessed Be,

Andaren x
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
nice message good rhyme scheme