Reviews for reading between the lines
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
I really like this. I get sick of making lists as well, I have never really known what it is that I am missing, I can complain about missing something but I'm never really sure what it is. Thats what makes poetry so interesting for me, I never know what I am going to write.

I love the way that you wrote this, you know what you are missing but don't know much else, just the way it should be I think, when you have all the answers that is when people give up.

Keep it up.
McKinley Cooper chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
The best thing about poetry (about art of any kind) is that no one can say, "This is not poetry." The washing machine buzzer can be art if you transform it. That's what you just did-transformed words to poetry to art to beauty to understanding...

It never ends, and it's wonderful. I like your list poem!

McKinley