Reviews for and maybe i'm a masochist
fairytale failure chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
Ohh, I love it. You have some wonderful descriptive phrases, I really like 'your lips uneven and malice tinted' and the very first line. The dialogue sounds great and keeps the piece interesting. One thing that confused me was the last line - I wasn't sure what you mean't by 'you're exactly that'. Is she broken and not beautiful, or broken and beautiful? Maybe you could make it clearer, otherwise I enjoyed reading this a lot.
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
good job. I really liked it :)

Scarlett Wynter chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
i love it. the imagery is just wonderful. excellent job
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
creepy-angsty-good, what else? xD