Reviews for Chocolate Chip Cookies
rainfaery13 chapter 4 . 5/5/2008
i like it, but i keep wondering why they don't seek legal help with the teacher and the principle. They clearly diplayed discrimination because of their sexuality and today they could get their asses sued and fired...especially in a school system... actually the teacher could get fired for mentioning that the kids had cocks down their i dunno maybe i'm thinking too much but it seems to me that if this happened to me, my family and i would have a lawyer on the phone...
gummybaby chapter 2 . 5/3/2008
aw, very cute. I think Zach and Daniel would make a very sweet couple.
Thread of Life chapter 4 . 5/3/2008
I like this so far! Keep up the good work I want to see what happens!
gothicHobbit08 chapter 2 . 5/2/2008
teehee! I love this! It's so obvious they both like each other, so I can't wait to find out what happened with Daniel's "discussion" with the principal and other stuff... the sleepover seems like an interesting idea with some potential...

keep writing!
gothicHobbit08 chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
Great start. I'm hooked... I'm not sure what else to say, I think it's too early to come up with any criticism or anything the slightest bit constructive, so I'll just come back later when there are more chapters D
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