Reviews for Stardust
she smolders chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
This is so gorgeous, I love the idea of "tracing constellations on each other's skin" and "streetlamps shining brightly in your eyes". Take care.
english summer rain chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
i really need to go stargazing one day.

this sparkles with beauty. :) great work.
fairytale failure chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
Gorgeous! I love the ending, especially how you connect constellations to being made of stardust.
Garrett Lee Bourdon chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
The meaning is good, but to be honest you need to find a different structure. It's very choppy and detracts from the poem as a whole. But it is a good poem.
i'd delete this if possible chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
Pretty. I love the fifth stanza especially and that general idea of tracing patterns of stars on skin... I really like this.
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
good piece, I really liked it. And I love that you mentioned Lake Michigan, cause I live near there lol. Good job :)