Reviews for Loneliness
shoshodem chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Loneliness is a dear friend to all writers! I liked it. I even liked how you put the word for loneliness in Filipino.
atalantea chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
I like the sarcasm and the concept. :D Although I'm kind of bothered by the "letting me to die" lines but I guess you can claim poetic license... or something. :D

Keep writing. :D
Kinna chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
This was an interesting twist on the view of loneliness. I thought that the choice of having the lines in the middle of the page was good and worked well for the poem.

The only part that sounded a bit off I thought were the lines, "letting me to die and to leave my sorrows/letting me to die and rest..." I think it would sound better as letting me die and leave my sorrows/letting me die and rest. Taking out the 'to' from both lines makes more sense grammatically.

The last line was good, and as if it was spoken to a true friend. The whole poem made the sense of loneliness all the more prevalent in how loneliness is the only one there for the speaker of the poem. It's touching and extremely sad at the same time.
systemofup chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
galing! ;) an impressive poem
stick chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
Interesting way to look at something that's viewed so negatively.

It was really beautiful. I liked it a lot.