wow I love this poem. It describes how I'm feeling right now.

I really liked the last stanza, but the whole poem seemed to be lacking something. I don't know what. There was a definate beauty to your description and imagery, but I felt like there was something forgotten, something misplaced and displaced out of this. Perhaps it's just me and my ridiculous nature to always want something that isn't there. Anyway, good job. I still liked it well.