Reviews for Intertwined Images
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
I really like the first four lines; there's a nice rhythm there, and some interesting concepts evoked.

However, it seems to me like the rest of the poem doesn't quite live up to those lines. I feel like it's just a bit too abstract, like I can't get a grip of what it's really saying. Being open to interpretation is a good thing, but this feels a bit too vague to leave the powerful impact that you start with.