Reviews for A Fool's Weakness |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story. Fitting title from her POV. Nice work. Keep writing! Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer. ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this. You definitely have a way of writing that allowed me to imagine everything perfectly. I hope you do write a larger story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it! I like it! Please write more? Please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy crap! 23 and not even weighing a hundred pounds? This isn't anorexic! This is a skeleton. "But Zeke, he's the living embodiment of a wet dream." This must be the hormones talking. Oh wait, "the boobs are well, small... Most people guess my age to be around fourteen, sixteen if I'm lucky." that's right. What hormones? Well anyway, this was a most amusing piece. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it xp |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think it is really good! You should write a story about it! D |