Reviews for The Kindness of Strangers
moongazer7 chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
I Loved the story! It'll be pleasant for you to write another chapter. Honestly, I want more.
J-Ling Lime chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
Wow, love the ending! It really leaves you wondering.


The stranger’s hair was matted and dark with grit and grime. She stood there, towering over him in her frayed and patched coat, making no move to help him up.

That was your first description of the person who saved him. "She" could be old or young, so when you said she was an old lady later on, it surprised me, because i was imagining it to be a young lady.

Another thing is that I was just wondering why the lady helped him so much. She saved his life, and then asks him for a favor, but then gives him the bottle that would heal anything. How is that a favor for her?

Also, watch out for cliches.

Good work though! Love it!

Keep writing