well on the plus side at least they are small grammar mistakes, without spell check some of my friends stories wouldn't be readable. Love the story!

That was a great ending to a fantastic story!

Wow! I just spent, like two hours reading the whole entire story. (I never jump into stories that are already finished because seeing all the chapters is just daunting to me but this story had me hooked and I just had to read on)

What a great job! You have a natural talent and I hope you keep writing. The descriptions, the dialouge, the pacing just all of it was awesome! Wonderful!

I did notice some misspeled words and typos but other than that it was practically perfect. :D

And now I'm off to read the sequel,

Ciao!

~nicola~

o love it :D x

Mwaha, great story :) Of course, i've already read it. Nice chapter title by the way. If you don't know who this is, it's Danielle, or as Catalano calls me, Gaby. :)

you have to write a sequel! really loved this story

that was amazing! i'm sad about damon though. plz update the sequel soon!

Anticipating the next chapter. o-o

it's over. sad. I was hoping she and damon would get together! can't wait for the sequel!

i haven't been able to review for a while, sorry P

anyway, I'm still reading your work

it's getting so good!

this chapter's ending's a little off though, by good job, still

awesome! keep it up.

Great, they're not angrey anymore. Update soon.

hey! i love the story were you dragongirl something on quizilla?

i was carcrashlover and i loved it there and now i'll lkove it here!

im just glad your still posting!

cant wait for more!

wow this is a great story! plz update soon!

OMG, omg, omg, I love how this story is developing. I love the interaction between Damon and Naomi!