Reviews for ROOMMATE NEEDED |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, I hope to see more of this story some day. It is flat out hilarious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is hilarious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my FRICKEN GOSH you need to write more like oh i don't know five decades ago lolz jk but seriously write more i loved it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love the whole theme of this story! It's pretty captivating, and an awesome idea. I think I like where it's going. The guy seems like a big asshole, but she seems to know how to take care of herself. Looks great to me! -dontneedyou |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is insanely well written, and I enjoyed reading every moment of it. (It's especially refreshing since there's so much crap written on this site!) The only things I had trouble with were some of the shifts in time. I don't know if it's just me and there's a formatting error on my screen or something, but sometimes you would change point of view or time period without any breaks in the text. That kind of threw me off a bit, but it wasn't too bad. I could understand it after I thought for a sec. But that aside, I love your style of writing, and the way you leave the readers guessing as to what happened for a while before finally revealing it. Well, anyways, excellent writing! Hope you get back to this soon. ~Ling Chi |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this fiC! definately need to update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You NEED to update this. Rarely can I come upon neurotic characters written non-neurotically... This is a very good compliment, I tell you. :)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE DON'T LEAVE THIS! it's too good to not be completed :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed this story. I hope you consider updating. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, Are you going to continue this story? Vic |
![]() ![]() ![]() loving the story plz update soon i cannot wait to c what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this!:D Steph is awesome!:D She's funny! Update soon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() heey, when's the next update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm liking this story :D Steph's so silly... truthfully, I can relate to her (a bit). She makes Vinny sound so cute too : Anyway, I like the childishness of this story. It seems so juvenile and innocent in it's own right :P Luke is, well, an interesting character. I still have to discover him more as the story progresses. :D Please update soon! u |