|Reviews for Never Enough Time|
| lucid-psyche chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Not bad, especially for something written in such a short amount of time. Only big nitpick: "Mrs. James married her lover prior to the death of her husband." Do you mean "after" instead of "prior"? Because right now, it sounds like she was a bigamist for a short amount of time...
Other than that, though, nice job!
| Singing for Absolution chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
Really intresting. I mean really. Like, space time continum intresting. I'd be cool to see this as a full story maybe...