Reviews for Burial
luv me like no other chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
makes me think. deep.
Shasta Valentine chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
this poem is aboslutely and one hundred percent beautiful poetry.

you've got an amazing talent, and i encourage you to keep writing more and more.

because i know i'll definately be reading it.

i hope you get alot of analytical reviews on this one.

because i'm just so enraptured with its talent, i dont have the time.

great job, obviously.

-sv
Thoughtful Silence chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
This was great! The repetition was very well done, the desolate tone was perfectly conveyed and some of the imagery was inspired. One thing to this though, I think the rhyming hinders this poem... like the last line of the fourth stanza was kinda... shaky... and the final line of the poem seemed a bit forced and anti-climactic for such a good piece. Anyways, keep up the good work.

-Silence
instantramen chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
This is very well written, I love the structure, I'm a little unclear on some parts but overall, I like it. Good job!