|Reviews for Forgotten|
| Cambion chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
Nearly surreal. Damn good. As with everyone, I loved the snowflakes.
| Harmonic Discord chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
I absolutely loved the imagery of this piece - beautiful! Your word choice is gorgeous. I liked how you create the picture of snowflakes suspended by string - such an awesome image!
My one criticism relates to the last line (“To forget everything is to escape the impossible.”) - it didn't make sense to me. I'm not sure whether this is just me though...
Other than that, wonderful job, and a pleasure to read.
- Harmonic Discord from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
| angeloftheninthorder chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
That was marvelous. The words leaked out such raw emotion and a passionate display. Definitely a favorite.