Reviews for Veil of Deceit
quicktart chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
I only just came to the realization that I haven't yet reviewed this, so here I go. (By the way, I tried to review FLCW, but the server told me that I couldn't review any chapter twice, even though you changed it. Sorry!)

I really like this poem. Not quite enjoy it, but you know. This isn't one of those things. But you can see a clear picture in it, and I could see the veil, actually. It was actually kind of pretty and eerie in the same take, if you know what I mean.

skylinez chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
fantastic buetiful

very intelligent