Reviews for Lego Me, Rally
xLittleBlackConverse chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
...love. Ohmygod, that has got to be the most adorable and original oneshot i have ever read, EVER. In my humble opinion ofcourse ]. Hahaha i loved the whole jello and LEGO (!) thing! it was so awesome. I love the name Cameron, and hate the name Ceceilia. But Raliegh is so darn cute.

Anyway it was really really really good. I read it 5 times or something. Meh.
GANGSTAR chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
You're gonna win! You're gonna win! Ha, Jello! This is my favorite one shot so far, did I tell you that in like all my reviews? Ha, Aww. I really liked this one :) Ohh "cheque" must be "check." :)
Cashaholic chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
omg. This is really good. So adorable. Love it!

x. Cashaholic
deny.me.not chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
Awe that was so sweet! Rally and Cammy, AWE. I would be so wounded and insulted if my ex went homo on me, I'd throw a major fit. Like I can't even imagine.

That was fantastic. I assure you that all the time you spent working on this was definitely worth it, because this is HOTT.

I look forward to your next one. ]

-dmn.
Unsociably Acceptable chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! i almost burst a blood vessel! haha, its so CUTE! (and yes, this time i found everything funny xP) hey, quick question...did cammy ever give rally her g-string back? xD

lo amo! its adoreable!
MuseofMagic chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
*chuckle* God, I love your one-shots! They make me smile and I need to smile more these days. (School is such a pain! *grumbles*)

Anyway, another fantastic story! Great job!

By the way, you should write from a guy's POV more often. It's even funnier when you do... and did Rally ever get her g-string back? *wink*
SparklingStar25 chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
love it!

this is just awesome!
Camelia Sinensis chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
So swet! :) I loved it, especially the title (best EVER!)
P chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
I love it. :)
Le Vance chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
I like Cammy. I thnk he's my type. Too bad he's not real.

I love this. srsly. I do.

I really like how you portrayed Cameron. He's not the typical MC. And... yeah.

Oh, and I love the G-string. :D
Incurable Dreamer chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
I really enjoyed this one-shot. In fact, I enjoyed it so much that I wrote some of your passages down in my trusty notebook (and mind you, I only do that when I've been so enthralled with the writing), specifically the one where he's comparing Cecelia with Rally: "The sudden revelation that they were absurdly different, yet somewhat comparable." Very poetic right there. I also laughed like a maniac on the microwave part. XD

This was very creative. Like always, your characters come alive on the page. You are so talented it gives me shivers! My favorite part was that it was long, so that I could live in the world you made for a little longer than normal. )
duckliy543 chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
i always really love your one shots.

they are always making me smile

this was long but it was really good!
GrannyP chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
Okay, so the title of the this story confused the heck out of me at first. I thought it was like saying "Let go of me, really" with a thick accent of some kind. Haha! Only I would think something like that. Hey, that could be your next idea. Hehe. No, I'm just weird.

This was pretty cute! And you are still rolling in the one-shots! Don't forget about your long story! I kind of miss it! Oh yeah, but as for this story, I loved the part at the end where he tricked Rally. That was cute. Heehee.
sweets555 chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
so cute! great job.
cls81690 chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
Very cute! I liked it. The lego plan was perfect, the characters seemed real (although if Cecilia could be a little more developed that would be neat), and the requirements were met. Well done!
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