Reviews for Lego Me, Rally
gulistala chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
Hey Lynn!

That was some amazing and humourous story you cooked up! Not to mention it tasted really good too! You've got excellent cooking skills. D

Okay, out of the cooking thing, was that Rayleigh's intention right from the start- to get Cameron to feel what she feels for him?

It was quite sweet. Though the ex could've at least told him that she didn't feel anything and that they should break up because of such and such.

I found this on another author's favourites list. And I'm glad I did. I think I'll check out your other work, too!

Striped Leopard chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
aww! This was so cute!
I Quoth Nevermore chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
Brilliant. I loved it. And I think it met all the requirements. Even though it was long, it wasn't boring at any point (like some people's). Great job. Write more soon!
IndigoAzucena chapter 1 . 5/3/2008



This fits the challenge perfectly. Great job!
xonea chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
This is by far,my favourie one-shot of yours!

I loved the whole Lego thing,very cute and the way they met,I thought it was very creative.

God,how I wish I could write like you. xD
TwinkleHeart chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
aw that was realy kute
silvershadow23 chapter 1 . 5/3/2008

I was so glad to get home and see this.


But yes.

You know most of my comments on this.


There was no fake flattery.

Just honesty.


And this story makes me happy.

I love it.

Its going in my favorites.


Even after reading and rereading it.

Thats how good it is.


When you get up and read your reviews...

You'll see it WASN'T just be that that this was beyond adorable.


- Teasie
Lily Llynn chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
Ooh I'm jealous. I wanted to do this challenge (I've written almost nothing, so yes, nothing coming out soon. Haha.), but you did an awesome job with it. I would like to know how he met Cecilia (it did say meet creatively for both) though how he did meet Rally was quite creative. I love the legos, I love Rally, and I love this oneshot. (: I think he might've pined a bit more, but I still love this, and I'm jealous Queen of Absolutely Everything added this before I did. XD

(Oh yes, I'm about to get started on your super long list. Hopefully I get through about 7 - I don't think I can do any more, haha - before I reach a verdict. I will read the rest of the list, though. (: )
sunflowersing chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
That was such a sweet story!

wookborm chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
AGGH. This is too cute for words. *melts into a puddle of human goo*
x3life chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
aww this was cute and funny )
MzKit10 chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
God this is wonderful! its amazing! its my new fav. story. (sorry my typing may get bad, my cat is trying to attack my hand) this is one of the best stories I've read. The language is believable, the character/narrator is honest and not overly perfect or flawed, he's human and its funny and sweet.


xoxluurve chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
Shoot girl x) This is my favourite one shot, no lie. I think you made the requirements - surpassed it even. Yeah, it's that amazing. Love, love, love the way their relationships grew. Definitely a light-hearted, heart-tugging, laugh-provoking one shot I will never grow tired of reading over and over again.

- - - xoxluurve
mia5081 chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
Aw, this was really cute.
only pretending chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
Oh my god. This is so cute! The whole time I couldn't wipe the smile off my face. But I think his ex-girlfriend should go die in a hole somewhere in the desert. Great work! :D
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