|Reviews for Be my friend|
| Chidaruma Kamisori chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
This was sweet. ]
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
I like everything except the first two lines... they didn't seem to fit and shouting seems so negative and the rest is really sweet so it seemed odd, but I like the rest of it the descriptions were nice and I like the last two lines a lot. The only thing is since you didn't really punctuate much else I might get rid of the period at the end
| Living Life Free chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
This remindes me of my best friend. I don't think no one in the world can live without a best friend.
| AK the Twilight chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
This poem kind of bothered me just because it seems to jump between friendship and love. By deduction of the title, this is friendship, but the wording is so deep that it seems like a love poem. The problem, in my opinion, is that you don't seem to nail either one.
Don't get me wrong; this is very well written...for a love poem. It just bothers me that it's only friendship, personally at least.
Other than that, this is very thoughtful and well written. Good job.
| XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
Love this! Hope there is someone like this _ b/c I can think of 5 right now. Great Job!
| sleeplessblue chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
there were some grammatical errors, but aww, very nice. i liked it!