|Reviews for I Love You|
| Mellow Fruitfulness chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
I like how each story twines in and out of the one preceding it, and the character's relationships all flow together. For such a short, transient piece, your characterization is pretty intense. :) The ending was a little ominous... have you thought of expounding on it at all, or just leaving it a vignette? Either way, it works. Good job.