|Reviews for Worthless|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/19/2008
In the last stanza all of the sudden you have punctuation. Why none in the first stanza? I like it. The descriptions of what they're doing are short and well done and the ending question is really great.
| Getuie chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
A reoccuring theme in your writing. Perhaps if the speaker changed their own perspective of themselves they might find a way not to allow anyone to treat them as they currently are.
| Jennifer chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
you're pretty dang good with these anthems (of my life.) sure you're not my imagineary friend i lost a few years back?
I'm serious. This was freaking really close to my life.
| sweets555 chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
you are not worthless.
dont you dare say that hun.
for the zillionth time, I'm going to punch him. Unless we're talkin about someone else?
Okay, so, odd as it sounds, i do love this poem. in a morbid sort of way.
| Casi chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
HUN! I'm so sorry. i can practically see your face if you were to be saying this, and i can feel the pain from it. i am SO sorry. I love you, and you know others do too, even if they dont always show it in the best ways.