|Reviews for SelfDestruction|
| AK the Twilight chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
There's a remarkable sense of danger in this poem, but the last stanza just feels a bit...well...final. This poem could've gone a bit further emphasizing the sense of danger, as the first two stanzas nail, but why change? It just feels like a drop-off and there's so much more that could've been shown to emphasize this. Don't worry; self-destruction is an interesting concept.
Regardless of these issues, I liked this. Good job.