|Reviews for Be My Nocturne|
| Auribus Teneo Lupum chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
I adore the imagery in this, icy tomb, empty air, bathe in cold sound, all of them practically flooded my mind with beautiful yet at the same time almost fearful images.
| lymli chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
I love the last verse,
"our icy tomb of music, will realize and break us from our prison" the imagery is wonderful even if the beginning is dark.
| misery sister chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
I love how you maintain a 'chilly' feel/atmosphere through the entire thing with your choice of words. Like:
creeping, haunting air, silence, bathe...
| pinkxbullets chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
I love the emotion in this. I had to read it over a few times, but I like that it's open to interpretation. Good job. )
| SeaVoi chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
This poem is wicked cool! The last two lines are glorious! I like the idea of screaming in empty air... it can be taken in so many different ways! SWEET!
| Counting Petals chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
I'm in love with the figurative language in this one. D
| Lise Meitner chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
Wow - so full of emotion! I love it :)
and "icy tomb of music" sent chills down my spine :D