Reviews for Be My Nocturne
Auribus Teneo Lupum chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
I adore the imagery in this, icy tomb, empty air, bathe in cold sound, all of them practically flooded my mind with beautiful yet at the same time almost fearful images.
lymli chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
I love the last verse,

"our icy tomb of music, will realize and break us from our prison" the imagery is wonderful even if the beginning is dark.
misery sister chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
I love how you maintain a 'chilly' feel/atmosphere through the entire thing with your choice of words. Like:

creeping, haunting air, silence, bathe...

Good job.
pinkxbullets chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
I love the emotion in this. I had to read it over a few times, but I like that it's open to interpretation. Good job. )
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
This poem is wicked cool! The last two lines are glorious! I like the idea of screaming in empty air... it can be taken in so many different ways! SWEET!
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
I'm in love with the figurative language in this one. D
Lise Meitner chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
Wow - so full of emotion! I love it :)

and "icy tomb of music" sent chills down my spine :D