|Reviews for Through the Pages of a Journal|
| The Friggin Stroke chapter 2 . 5/8/2008
I love your delivery of words. And I'm not just saying it because I'm your friend.
I have a suggestion...I think it'll be nice if you'd express Nancy's thoughts, whatever's going on in her head. i.e., does she have battling thoughts in her head about something; does she say what she really wants to say, u know those kinds of stuff.
btw, the play they attended reminds me of tinikling and other school activities u guys joined in school together. hehe..
hope my point's clear. keep it up!