Reviews for Yuki's Haiku 2
Erlkoenigin chapter 15 . 5/6/2009
I like the idea of the whole world in the scattered glass
Erlkoenigin chapter 18 . 4/29/2009
I like this Haiku! The last line is genial
Erlkoenigin chapter 9 . 4/29/2009
sad but beautiful
Erlkoenigin chapter 7 . 4/29/2009
again a great haiku! You always want what you cannot have!
Erlkoenigin chapter 5 . 4/29/2009
that's true, just one step to far can cause a catastophy.

I like your haikus!
Erlkoenigin chapter 2 . 4/29/2009
Again a good haiku, I like the idea of growing
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
I hope world will fade away! I like this haiku
Sercus Kaynine chapter 20 . 4/26/2009
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I didn't like how the poem repeated itself a bit because it could have benefited from diversity.

The ending was good, though, because it made the idea clear.
Sercus Kaynine chapter 19 . 4/26/2009
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I love the fiery imagery here beause it makes the poem seem intense.

I like the vivid word choice too because it keep s the poem interesting.
Sercus Kaynine chapter 18 . 4/26/2009
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I like the tentativeness of the piece as it makes for good suspense.

I didn't like how the formatting went though because it was kind of confusing.
Sercus Kaynine chapter 17 . 4/26/2009
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I like the mood of this piece because it really leads the reader on.

I didn't like the lack of imagery because I think it could've made the piece better.
Sercus Kaynine chapter 16 . 4/26/2009
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I like the vivid descriptions used here because it really brings the piece to life.

I like the action described here because it keeps the piece interesting.
Sercus Kaynine chapter 15 . 4/26/2009
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I like the imagery used here. It was very beautiful.

I like the idea described here because it's original.
Sercus Kaynine chapter 14 . 4/26/2009
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I like how you made this seem like an epic battle piece even though it was only a few words long. It was a very smart way to organize.

Hmm... I didn't like the idea of it because I didn't really see the central theme or message.
Chasing Skylines chapter 11 . 4/26/2009
I liked this because of the imagery. While I at first thought "fading the rain" was sort of awkward, I think it works and created a nice image.

I liked the ending. It was abrupt and everything just stopped and you could imagine a pitch black place and it links back to the first line. Two sides of the same thing, perhaps?

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