Reviews for a romance for the sky
McKinley Cooper chapter 2 . 6/14/2008
"Smearing her palms with raw innocence." I love it.

McKinley
Scarlett Wynter chapter 2 . 6/3/2008
you're too hard on yourself; this poem is great. the imagery is creative and descriptive and the last line is killer. this goes in my favorites :)
Faith Adeline chapter 2 . 6/2/2008
no good? This was great! Good work, I loved it :)

Faith
East-0f-Eden chapter 2 . 6/2/2008
that was very pretty. I love it when ppl talk about the moon/stars. I don't know why.
Scarlett Wynter chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
with a name like scarlett, how could I not review? lol

"and i write your name across the sidewalk-/just to remember I knew you once" - wonderflul line, it's so profound. This is an interesting prologue! I alsp like the lines that you deleted, especially the last one about ink smudges & skin blemishes, that was powerful. I look forward to reading more!
McKinley Cooper chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
so you can just be the shakespeare-think about it

someone needs to fill the empty

McKinley
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
'my knees ram through the pavement' -wow, cool image.

i like the deleted lines as well.

-adrian