Reviews for Times Like These
AK the Twilight chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
This does follow a pretty simple template of sorts for emotional writing, but it wasn't without its inventiveness, especially in the language. The whirlwind theme is sophisticated and intense enough to prove your point. It's also good that you integrated the sense of longing for this man you speak of.

This was strong and nails a sense of quiet intensity. It's not entirely complex or original, but it manages to keep a ferocious tone throughout. Overall, great job.