|Reviews for Did You Save Me?|
| Auribus Teneo Lupum chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
The repetition of certain words added so much to urgency that pulsated through the piece even as life was beginning to slip away.
| Counting Petals chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
Did you mean to repeat the first line, or was it just the FP formatting? (Gosh, that's so annoying.) If it was intentional, I didn't really like it; it felt repetitive.
I did like the rhythm to this, though. It was nice.
| lymli chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
it's kinda romantic, it seems you fell for a girl and you see her like a goddess, I guess.
| ScarletDreamer chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Beautiful. I loved the imagery.
| NotABanana chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
Oh, I like this one a lot. The metaphors are great; very original. Your work is unique, and that's not something you see that often. I like how you took the emotion of love and made it something that people haven't seen before. Nice job.
I'd love it if you would check out more of my writing - I would like to see what you think.
| 123456DoesNotExist chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
Nice poem, I liked it.
I really got the feeling that you were drowning at the beginning, and your imagery helped carry that through as the poem went along. I liked that it ends on a happy note, though, it gives it a finished sense. The breaking up of your lines also helped it flow.
| Grim-Reaper21 chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
i like it. It's deep but has a point to it that's what makes them good. I hope you keep writing