|Reviews for Genocide|
| Counting Petals chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
It seems like this would be very simple, because of its length, but it's not. Very nicely done.
| snowdance chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
Great poem. In history, we did a whole five-month unit on genocide and this pretty much sums it up. The rhyme scheme adds a good rhythm to the poem. I was wondering, is "Bang" meant to be capitolized?
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
I'm not sure if it was on purpose, but there is a slight rhyme scheme in there, which is nice because a really obvious one would be odd in a piece like this.
I also like the description "hiss goes the poisons" because hiss was an interesting word. The only thing is poisons go (since they are plural).
The other thing is your punctuate the end with a period and you use that colon, but the rest as no punctuation. I might add some.
Really great piece. It described war bery wee and makes an awesome point.
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| Love.Is.Free chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
Very deep. Well done.