Reviews for With the Tape?
Huda Allie chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
I liked it. I liked how Cam felt all the emotions that the reader was sure to feel. But on the other hand I would have liked I different ending (and by different, no, I do not just mean, like, "and they all lived happily ever after"), I mean, like, a sort of resolution. Although I can understand if you have no time. Either way, I think that this is an excellant example of, sort of, implied humor (I just made up that term, that's why I say "sort of"). In other words, it wasn't "lol-funny" but there was a definite humor throught in how you portrayed the characters so cliche-ly and yet, with a new idea. GOOD JOB!

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