Reviews for Empty Existence
Pierce Dorian chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
This is a pretty cool poem. I really hope any of that stuff never happens.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
I like this piece because it brings up a very good point. I also love the ending, it sounds funny, but is probably insanely true. The only thing is (especially in the beginning) the italicizing and placement of that line made it look like a note with the title, not part of the piece.

Other than that it was a really great piece. I hope you get a good grade!

PS If you're bored today check out the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in my profile)
lkjhgfdswertyuikmnbvcxsrtyuknb chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
I've always been terrifyed of WW3, and this describes how it could be perfectly...

And I love that quote by Albert Einstein, although it scares me even more sometimes, but that's just the way war is...
xEmoMuffinx chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
This coming from the person who was so caught up about my dodgy rhythm in Incomplete. I already commented on her dA so I'll just cut it out here.

Anyway, I like the last line before the quote finishes. :D

The digital realm awaits...