Reviews for Alpha Man |
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![]() ![]() ![]() really really sweet ! i liked it very much . |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really good...and a special interest to me... I liked it please make a sequel...to it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it! |
![]() ![]() Very Nice- I really enjoyed reading it - |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved your story! The last two parts felt more like one long epilogue, but it's all good, because for some reason I kept thinking chapter 7 was the last chapter. Cody is super adorable, btw. ) I thought you ended the story really well too. I look forward to reading more of your stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this story a lot, loved the ending, and Cody is such a cute boy. Can't wait to read more from you. Middi~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() heya, that's a great ending. cya later ~ Alenor |
![]() ![]() ![]() CJ is a great woman, making the compromise to keep her man happy so he wouldn't have to give up his dream and keeping hers in the process with Brava, just brilliant, loved it. They really do make a great team, I like how they collabortate effectively, especially with Cody. They are just one of those couples that were meant to happen. New fav definitely, to reread anytime. Great ending line: "It was only recently she had discovered the ultimate thrill had nothing to do with how fast, or how dangerous she could fly but all do with the man currently standing protectively next to her. A thrill that she had felt but had been to naïve to recognised when she had first lent Jamie her Cessna over twenty years ago." |
![]() ![]() ![]() I actually thought that Mark was going to do something bad! Oh well..great ending though |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey! aw that was a really lovely ending to a really great story. I hope you had fun writing it and good luck with future stories. |
![]() ![]() wow! you always write the best stories. Your one of the few authors on this site that I actually go back and read the stories over and over again. another excellent job! can't wait to see more from you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() short, btu sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, I loved every chapter of it! Loved how you wrapped stuff up with Mark, too. Just had a calc exam so my brain is kinda fried-I can't think of anything else to say, lol. Awesome ending! ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() so is the story finished? |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, that's sweet. they're all happy happy. cya later ~ ALenor. |