Reviews for Maybe
flies.like.decay chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
seems familiar. like, "stealing henry" familiar.
JOysiej chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
I very much like this story, part of it I've also gone through. Well, not really the same, but still, my mother would become a fake being, not even a person anymore, and this kind of remembers me of the time my parents weren't divorced. I like your writing style, it reads quickly and nicely )
Woe Betide Her Ill-Faught Face chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
Sad story, but beautifully written. Too vivid about the father and his chocolate turtles! Very sad. You've got talent.

"After the freedom wore off, my mother stopped with her memorable comments. She never pointed out my home anymore and she never asked me to count train cars with her. I used to wonder why she wasn’t the same anymore, but then I realized that maybe it was me. Maybe, she figured she didn’t have to point out home to her teenage daughter."

I know what that feels like. Sometimes I resent it. I thought I might have been the only one with this frustration. So I hear you loud and clear.
pandorka42 chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
Genius.