Reviews for Vampiric
Shasta Valentine chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
i really love this poem and the imagery you invoked and the play on words...amazing to me.

Clutching hearts

Covering eyes

Show your emotions

Who will feed tonight.

great great great job. i only wish you would say until instead of till.

until next poem!

-sv
Unique1952 chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Wow, another wonderful poem. Despite the darkness in the poem, it is very storng and thought provoking. Nice work.
Isca chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Excellent vampiric poem!
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
I loved the comparison of emotions to a vampire wanting to feed, because it's so true; certain emotions, like anger and jealousy, just keep feeding on you until there's nothing left. Nicely done!
lymli chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
even if it's dark by the way, I think this poem is powerful, what you mean there were deep thoughts.

ps: yr avatar is cool.