|Reviews for Vampiric|
| Shasta Valentine chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
i really love this poem and the imagery you invoked and the play on words...amazing to me.
Show your emotions
Who will feed tonight.
great great great job. i only wish you would say until instead of till.
until next poem!
| Unique1952 chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Wow, another wonderful poem. Despite the darkness in the poem, it is very storng and thought provoking. Nice work.
| Isca chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Excellent vampiric poem!
| Counting Petals chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
I loved the comparison of emotions to a vampire wanting to feed, because it's so true; certain emotions, like anger and jealousy, just keep feeding on you until there's nothing left. Nicely done!
| lymli chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
even if it's dark by the way, I think this poem is powerful, what you mean there were deep thoughts.
ps: yr avatar is cool.