|Reviews for Won't Let Go|
| Ken Childs chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
| Stewart MacDonald chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
Hey. Another decent work here. In the first paragraph though, is bellows a good word? Usually people asscociate bellowing with men. Maybe, 'Screams to go' or something might be better. Bellow. Such a funny word. For some reason I always think of walruses when I hear that word, or is it walri?
Aside from the funny word, this seems pretty good. Well put together and emotionally in tune and all that happy shit. Peace.