Reviews for When All's Said and Done
Little Devil Alice chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
it's really good, though kind of sad.

the upward glance chapter 1 . 10/16/2010

I cherish discovering worthy poetry!


Your structure is very sparse and minimalistic

Love it

Yet the description and metaphors are so descriptive and not, ya know?

Like a mist...

Your tone and diction are perfect

Contrary to what others said, I enjoyed the lack of punctuation.

It's not a requirement; poetry is very free.

And, it suits your theme to lack the punctuation.

I loved this...

Undrahas chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
Aweome! Really good! I really loved it! It was so good! Write more poetry!

Abella chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
The rhythm was nice, and I liked the last three lines especially, but you really need some punctuation thrown in there.