|Reviews for When All's Said and Done|
| Little Devil Alice chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
it's really good, though kind of sad.
| the upward glance chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
I cherish discovering worthy poetry!
Your structure is very sparse and minimalistic
Yet the description and metaphors are so descriptive and not, ya know?
Like a mist...
Your tone and diction are perfect
Contrary to what others said, I enjoyed the lack of punctuation.
It's not a requirement; poetry is very free.
And, it suits your theme to lack the punctuation.
I loved this...
| Undrahas chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
Aweome! Really good! I really loved it! It was so good! Write more poetry!
| Abella chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
The rhythm was nice, and I liked the last three lines especially, but you really need some punctuation thrown in there.