|Reviews for Sunrise|
| Lonzo chapter 3 . 5/9/2008
| Lonzo chapter 2 . 5/7/2008
That is really good. And I mean REALLY good. Is there going to be a third chapter? I have to read more! Got me hungry for what happens between them!
| Madeline Luca chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
You've done the impossible. You made me read a story that gave me visions of Nic Cage, and I do NOT like picturing Nic Cage!
A good starting. I like the way you describe the things the angels are seeing.
The only thing I'd say is that it was quite hard on the eyes to read, maybe try formatting it a bit differently? Spread it out a bit more so it doesn't swim quite so much.
I look forward to the next installment though. :)